The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart and graph chart illustrate the data on
crime
in the UK last
year breaking down by age
groups
and types.
Nearly half of the crimes
in the UK last
year belong to violent crimes
. Property crime
and drug-related crime
rank second and third at 23% and 22% respectively. Just below one-tenth of the crimes
are public order violations.
There are discrepancies in the rate of crime
by age
groups
. The Fix the agreement mistake
group
crime
rates
in children aged 8 and under are negligible. The crime
rate started at 5 crimes
per ten thousand in the population age
12. The age
groups
that crime
rates
are significantly higher than the others are 16, 20, and 24 years at 70, 80, and 60 crimes
per ten thousand citizens. These rates
are much decreased in adults who are 24 and older. At the age
of 24, crime
rates
are only one-third of the previous category at just 20 per ten thousand. These trends gradually decline over age
until the age
of 44, when the rates
of crimes
level off at just below 10% towards older age
groups
.
Violent crime
is the most prevalent type of crime
in the UK. The population that is
most responsible for these crimes
are the ones in their teenage years and early twenties.Submitted by panus.cho on
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