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The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below table illustrates some
informations
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 about age, average revenue per person and society under
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poverty
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the poverty
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 line in California,
Utal
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Utah
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Florida
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. It is conspicuous the proportion that they are under
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poverty
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 line in California is more than the others.
According to
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Florida
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 is 16 per cent.
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, the population below
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poverty
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 line has the highest percentage in spite of the fact that they earn more revenue.
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, the percentage of people
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aged over 60 in Utal is 8
person
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 and in
Florida
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 is slightly over
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fifths.
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, the average income in
Florida
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 is 22,000 and in Utal is 17,000. In conclusion, the following diagram demonstrates some
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 about age, average income per person and population under
poverty
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 in three states in The United States of America.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, florida with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Metrics
  • Economic conditions
  • Cost of living
  • Percentage
  • Poverty line
  • Demographics
  • Workforce composition
  • Income disparity
  • Correlation
  • Economic health
  • Social-economic challenges
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