The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below table illustrates some
informations
about age, average revenue per person and society under Change the wording
information
pieces of information
poverty
line in California, Add an article
the poverty
Utal
and Correct your spelling
Utah
Florida
. It is conspicuous the proportion that they are under poverty
line in California is more than the others.
Add an article
the poverty
According to
the chart, In California aged under 18 is 17 per cent, In Utal is 28 per cent and in Florida
is 16 per cent. Furthermore
, the population below poverty
line has the highest percentage in spite of the fact that they earn more revenue. Add an article
the poverty
Moreover
, the percentage of people who
aged over 60 in Utal is 8 Correct pronoun usage
apply
person
and in Fix the agreement mistake
people
Florida
is slightly over than
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apply
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
fifths. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the average income in Florida
is 22,000 and in Utal is 17,000.
In conclusion, the following diagram demonstrates some datas
about age, average income per person and population under Correct your spelling
data
poverty
in three states in The United States of America.Submitted by bazarjanimohammadreza83 on
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