the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
This
Line chart presents the average carbon dioxide emissions
each
person in 4 countries from 1967 to 2007. Change preposition
of each
Overall
, United
Kingdom decreased slightly and Portugal rose sharply in these 40 years.
There was a stayed trend in Correct article usage
the United
UK
from 1967 to 1977. It started from 11 Co2 Correct article usage
the UK
emissions
in metric tones
in these 2 years. After that, there was gradually went down between 1977 to 2007. There Correct your spelling
tons
was
9 Co2 Change the verb form
were
emissions
in 2007. It is still the highest Co2
Correct your spelling
CO2
emissions
in 4 countries.
Portugal went up modestly from 1967 to 1987, 1997 to 2007. But there was a significant went up from 1987 to 1997. It went up from 1 to 5 in 40 years. Portugal and Italy are
the lowest Co2 Verb problem
have
emissions
in the chart. Italy was
the second Verb problem
had
high
Co2 Correct word choice
highest
emissions
in 1967. There was a dramatically
rise from 1967 to 1977. But it went down sharply between 1977 and 1987. It Change the adverb
dramatic
also
fell slightly in
1997 to 2007.
Swedeen increased sharply Change preposition
from
in
1967 to 2007.Change preposition
from
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