The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
change
of three metals' price
with Fix the agreement mistake
prices
monthly
Add an article
a monthly
change
towards 12 months
in 2014.
Overall
, the price of nickel and copper experienced decline
, Correct article usage
a decline
while
Zinc looked
went up in the Verb problem
apply
last
period of time.
In the first six months
, all of the metals' percentage
of change
significantly decreased. At first,
nickel was in the highest position that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
stood
at 6% Wrong verb form
standing
then
dramatically dipped to the lowest percentage
along the period at -3%. On the other hand
, zinc increased for
2% before gradually Change preposition
by
fell
to a negative Wrong verb form
falling
percentage
. However
, there was a moderate decline for
the Change preposition
in
percentage
of change
of copper which made it in the first rank in June.
Move
to the next six Wrong verb form
Moving
months
, all of the type
of metals Change to a plural noun
types
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
remainly
stable for three Correct your spelling
remaining
remained
mainly
months
before finally
climbed
. Ultimately, nickel, copper, and zinc Wrong verb form
climbing
were
only had a slight Unnecessary verb
apply
different
which stood at 1%, 1,5%, and 2%, respectively.Replace the word
difference
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, months, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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