People
always think
children
are now given
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excessive freedom. The form is hazardous to
children
and as
such
is not needed. I entirely disagree with
this
opinion and I believe that
children
should be naughty and bad. So they may join
criminalFix the agreement mistake
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.
To begin
with, some more
people
have been buying something which
children
are wantedWrong verb form
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, and they are not being hard. If parents do not
beVerb problem
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hard,
children
will misbehave and be unpleasant.
For example
,
children
of
currentCorrect article usage
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are wayward. Mainly fathers are
being Verb problem
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culpable
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because
pro Correct word choice
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genies
beWrong verb form
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with their mothers and their mothers are schoolmarmish, and they fear
of Change preposition
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their mothers.
However
, fathers buy everything for them,
afterCorrect word choice
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that,
children
will be wayward. So parents do not have to play by
children
’s rules.
On the other hand
,
anotherReplace the adjective
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parents are not focusing on their
children
because chiefly they are spending their time
to workChange the verb form
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.
Then
children
are doing activities which they
wantedWrong verb form
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with bad boys.
For instance
, they are smoking and drinking alcohol. Worse than
that
is Unnecessary verb
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40%
crimesChange preposition
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are being
doneVerb problem
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by
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people
.
That is
wretchedness.
In conclusion,
this
essay argues that some believe that
children
nowadays have too much freedom, but I
didWrong verb form
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not agree
thatChange preposition
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way. In my opinion,
people
must look after their
children
and must not do everything which
children
are wanted.