The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The
map
given illustrates Darwin's waterfront area's changes between 2009 and 2014. Overall
, it can be seen that by elimination of industrial area
reforestation has occurred in the south of the Fix the agreement mistake
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map
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In 2009, in the middle of the map
, some residential buildings were seen
located in front of the factories. Verb problem
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Then
, they were improved in 2014, also
industrial areas south of houses and the middle of the circle footpath were destroyed. Therefore
, another swimming pool was established in the west of the circle footpath. In addition
, some new green spaces were located in the southwest in 2014.
Moreover
, the new university was built on the west of the map
close to the residential area. Also
, we observe that a harbour was built in the southeast in 2014. Another footpath was built from the harbour which connects the sea to the forest.Submitted by arefehbks on
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