The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below line graph demonstrates the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany between 2005 and 2015.
Furthermore
, all of the graphs have an Linking Words
upwire
trend except France.
Correct your spelling
upward
According to
the chart, In 2005 almost 32 per cent of people do recycling in The United Kingdom. Linking Words
In addition
, one Linking Words
in fifths
of households perform recycling and in 2015 slightly over Add a hyphen
in-fifths
than
60 per cent performed recycling. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, In 2011 almost 45 per cent Linking Words
conduct
recycling, Wrong verb form
conducted
also
In 2013 around one Linking Words
in
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apply
seconds
of Fix the agreement mistake
second
regional
Add an article
the regional
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
do
recycling. Plus, between 2007 and 2009 we do not have Wrong verb form
did
a
significant growth.
In conclusion, Remove the article
apply
this
line graph illustrates what percentage of households conduct recycling. It is conspicuous Linking Words
in
2005 France had the highest percentage, Correct word choice
that in
while
in 2015 had the lowest percentage. Linking Words
Moreover
, between 2007 and 2009 we do not have Linking Words
a
significant growth.Remove the article
apply
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