The bar chart shows the number of heat-related illness suffered by high school students per 100 000 sports events in central US states. The line graph shows the average temperatures for one year in a central US state. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart and line graph offer insights into the occurrences of heat-related
illnesses
among high school students during sports events in central US states, as well as
the average temperatures throughout the year
in a central US state.
The bar chart depicts the number
of illnesses
per 100,000 sports events, with the horizontal axis
representing the months
of the year
and the vertical axis
indicating the number
of illnesses
, ranging from 0 to 70. The highest number
of illnesses
, almost 70, was recorded in August, while
the lowest number
of illnesses
, 0, occurred in February. Notably, there was a significant drop in September, with only 13 cases, followed by a slight decrease in the subsequent months
until December.
The line graph showcases two lines representing the average temperatures throughout the year
in a central US state. The horizontal axis
indicates the months
of the year
, while
the vertical axis
displays the temperature
. The temperature
steadily rises from January, reaching its peak in July. Following July, the temperature
gradually decreases.
In conclusion, the bar chart demonstrates a correlation between the number
of heat-related illnesses
and the months
of the year
, with a peak in August and a significant drop in September. The line graph exhibits the temperature
pattern throughout the year
, with a steady increase from January to July, followed by a gradual decrease.Submitted by nicolasbungaran on
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