The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income.

The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income.
The bar chart provides information about the proportion of their
income
to average household spending in three
income
categories
.
Overall
, housing takes up almost the same percentage in all
categories
,
whereas
retirement savings vary significantly depending on the
income
level. Housing takes almost one-third of salaries for all
categories
,
on the other hand
, eating out is almost the same for the three levels, 4% for high and medium
income
and 3% for low
income
. In comparison, food varies significantly, where it drops almost by half in every category from 12 per cent for low salaries to 5 per cent for high salaries. The opposite to it is retirement savings, where 17%
for
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high
wages
and 3
percent
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for low
wages
. Education is almost the same for low and medium
wages
at 3%, but it takes up 6% for high
wages
. Clothing and entertainment comprise nearly the same percentage of 10 for the three
categories
.
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