The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The map illustrates the current scenario of an industrial area of Norbiton
town
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, and its future development.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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currently, it’s an industrial area equipped with many factories,
while
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the future development removed these with new dwellings and provides more amenities. Currently, the northern part of the
town
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is equipped with farmland and a long-running river. The
town
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is present at the west, and at the
center
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, the roundabout connects southern and eastern roads and is surrounded by some industries.
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, in the future, all factories will be replaced with new housing. Another road is planned to be connected from the north side which crosses over the river.
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, another roundabout will be constructed on the southern side of Norbiton
town
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. The
town
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will provide more facilities including, shops in the west, and the medical
center
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in the south of the city. Playground and school, are
also
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present at the east of
town
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and linked with the bride for better transportation.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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