The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above shows information about the
number
of people who came to the Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. The data reveals Use synonyms
this
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number
is divided into two categories of Use synonyms
visitors
, which were Use synonyms
visitors
staying on cruise ships and Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the island, Use synonyms
while
the total of people increased over time.
In the years 2010 and 2012, the lowest Linking Words
number
of tourists staying on cruise ships was 0.25 Use synonyms
million
people. Use synonyms
Then
, it rose gradually from 0.25 in 2012 to 2 Linking Words
million
in 2017. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the island at the beginning of the period was around 0.75 Use synonyms
million
tourists. Use synonyms
Then
, it climbed up to 1.5 in 2013. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
this
data was maintained until 2015 before a slight fall to 1.25 Linking Words
million
in 2016. And Use synonyms
then
back to 1.5 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.
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Overall
, Linking Words
visitors
staying on cruise ships have always had a lower Use synonyms
number
than the other grouping on average. Use synonyms
Although
, Linking Words
at the end
of the period the Linking Words
number
was slightly higher than the other. Use synonyms
However
, the total of Linking Words
visitors
from 2010 to 2017 has been growing steadily.Use synonyms
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