The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph above shows information about the
number
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of people who came to the Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. The data reveals
this
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number
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is divided into two categories of
visitors
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, which were
visitors
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staying on cruise ships and
visitors
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staying on the island,
while
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the total of people increased over time. In the years 2010 and 2012, the lowest
number
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of tourists staying on cruise ships was 0.25
million
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people.
Then
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, it rose gradually from 0.25 in 2012 to 2
million
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in 2017.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the island at the beginning of the period was around 0.75
million
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tourists.
Then
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, it climbed up to 1.5 in 2013.
Furthermore
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,
this
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data was maintained until 2015 before a slight fall to 1.25
million
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in 2016. And
then
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back to 1.5
million
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at the end
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of the period.
Overall
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,
visitors
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staying on cruise ships have always had a lower
number
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than the other grouping on average.
Although
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,
at the end
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of the period the
number
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was slightly higher than the other.
However
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, the total of
visitors
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from 2010 to 2017 has been growing steadily.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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