The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above shows information about the
number
of people who came to the Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. The data reveals this
number
is divided into two categories of visitors
, which were visitors
staying on cruise ships and visitors
staying on the island, while
the total of people increased over time.
In the years 2010 and 2012, the lowest number
of tourists staying on cruise ships was 0.25 million
people. Then
, it rose gradually from 0.25 in 2012 to 2 million
in 2017. On the other hand
, the number
of visitors
staying on the island at the beginning of the period was around 0.75 million
tourists. Then
, it climbed up to 1.5 in 2013. Furthermore
, this
data was maintained until 2015 before a slight fall to 1.25 million
in 2016. And then
back to 1.5 million
at the end
of the period.
Overall
, visitors
staying on cruise ships have always had a lower number
than the other grouping on average. Although
, at the end
of the period the number
was slightly higher than the other. However
, the total of visitors
from 2010 to 2017 has been growing steadily.Submitted by talithanakhwah19 on
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