The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.
The bar graph illustrates the data on the male and female employment rates in six countries in two years, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in the number of male and female workers
in every country in both years.
The data show that Iceland had higher average male workers
than other countries. In 1995, the figure for male workers
in Iceland was approximately 70%, and then
It increased to 85% in 2005. In the second place, there was Switzerland as the country with the average male workers
at about 65% in 1995 and it grew up to around 78% in 2005.
In contrast
, Switzerland had a higher average of female workers
than other countries in both years. In 1995, the number of female workers
reached 55% and it increased to 65% in 2005. In second place was the USA with the number of female workers
more than 40% in 1995 and then
it had a significant increased
to 60% in 2005.
.Replace the word
increase
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