In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

In

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modern era, it is argued by some

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people that both parents are needed to find jobs to support their

children

to gain benefit from the extra income,

while

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others think that kids need their father and mother to

spending

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more time so they feel supported.

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explanation as well examples for both

side

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opinions. The additional income always

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an advantage for

family

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them self, especially for the growth of the

children

.

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, the parents can take their offspring to the best school with the best teachers and hire a tutor for studying.

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a few reasons why I believe that the additional salary will

provided

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the

children

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best environment for their learning

activity

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, but, the success of their

kid

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kids

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depend on

them self

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themself

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.

On the other hand

, it is believed that

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of their parents will have a negative impact on their development because of

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of support, affection and figures to guide them in their troubled times.

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, a kid will find

other role model

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of

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how will they define their personality and how to behave in

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society, they don't have anybody to

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on or

taught

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them how to do it, that

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I believe, in a supportive family the kid will have a better personality and social skill compare on the family that only give affection with money on their offsprings. still, by providing the best education that money can buy really helpful to increase success chance in

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academic learning. In conclusion, the two

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sides of opinion have their own advantages and disadvantages. From my perspective, we need to balance the need

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acquire more money with spending time with our

children

, even though, it will be hard to adjust the time of work and play with your

children

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