Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since
the
housing prices have been proliferating in the Correct article usage
apply
last
few years, some people opine that the Linking Words
government
should allocate free housing facilities. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, others said that it is not the Linking Words
government
's duty to take care Use synonyms
of
. Correct pronoun usage
of it
This
essay will discuss both Linking Words
the
views in the following paragraphs and my personal opinion is in the conclusion.
Conspicuously, there are several circumstances where the high authorities of the Correct article usage
apply
nation
should allow Use synonyms
no cost
accommodation. Add a hyphen
no-cost
Firstly
, Linking Words
the
civil servants, army officers and soldiers should get free housing Correct article usage
apply
benefit
as they protect our Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
nation
internally and externally in adverse circumstances. Use synonyms
The
Correct article usage
Government
government
jobs mainly do not offer lucrative Use synonyms
salary
to Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
the
Correct article usage
apply
government
employees so it would be hard to purchase Use synonyms
new
house nowadays. Correct article usage
a new
Secondly
, the Linking Words
government
should offer free accommodation for the victims of natural calamities Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
flood
and Fix the agreement mistake
floods
earthquake
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
earthquakes
of
Change preposition
apply
the
people have home insurance but the insurance companies do not compensate their customers under the "Act of God" clause Correct article usage
apply
Linking Words
that
is why in Correct pronoun usage
which
such
cases the Linking Words
government
should come forward. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the Linking Words
government
needs to develop Use synonyms
a
temporary aid for indigenous people so they can Correct article usage
apply
also
dream Linking Words
for
their first house.
Change preposition
of
However
, there are some thoughts Linking Words
who
insist Correct pronoun usage
that
us
Correct pronoun usage
we
to
focus on Fix the infinitive
apply
to
the other side as well. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, housing is an individual responsibility. Just because someone is working for the Linking Words
nation
's development Use synonyms
that
does not mean the Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
should give free housing Use synonyms
benefit
on top of their monthly income. Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
Additionally
, the Linking Words
government
should not Use synonyms
bare
the stress of individual housing as there are other major concerns in the Verb problem
bear
nation
which require undivided attention Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
high
inflation rate, crime rate and terrorism.
In conclusion, as per the aforementioned Correct article usage
the high
points
I believe that the Add a comma
points,
no cost
housing advantage is Add a hyphen
no-cost
allow
to the higher Wrong verb form
allowed
government
employees for Use synonyms
the
temporary period only and invest Correct article usage
a
remaining
Add an article
the remaining
fund
in the welfare of the citizens.Fix the agreement mistake
funds
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