The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy
The diagram illustrates
metamorphosis
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the metamorphosis
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of a
lady bird
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ladybird
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and its anatomy. All in all, it can be vividly seen that
this
life cycle involves four stages from eggs to fully mature Ladybugs with complex body
structure
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structures
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. In the early stage, female ladybugs lay their several oval eggs down on a leaf. These eggs hatch
from
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two to five days, so that they become
larvaes
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larvae
and actively find their prey. Good! Twenty-one days later, the living creature will become motionless in the pupation process which takes seven days. Once the insects have undergone the pupa stage, they hang beneath a leaf by their tail,
thus
transforming them
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dome-shaped adults. Ok! Later if the adult ladybugs find their opposite sex gender, the life cycle is going
to begin
again. Turning to the second picture, there are eight parts of the ladybug's body. It has
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a bright-red
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bright-red
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bright red
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color
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with several black dots on its elytra covering two pairs of transparent wings. If the insect flies, a round-big-black
abdomend
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abdomen
is seen. Good The four tiny legs help them to roam around. There is a pronotum connecting its body with a
half round
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head having two antennas and small eyes.
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