The 3 pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001.
The given pie charts
compares
the proportions of expenditure by a specific school in the UK in the years 1981, 1991,and 2001.
Change the verb form
compare
Overall
,we can see from the graphs that the majority of Linking Words
resources
were invested in teachers' salaries.Use synonyms
On the contrary
,the cost of insurance was the minimum and other Linking Words
resources
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such
as books and hardware varied from different periods.
Looking at the information in more detail,spending on teachers which accounted for the most proportion rose up to 50% but Linking Words
finally
fell to 45% .Next came paying for other workers which Linking Words
initially
constituted the second largest amount ,at 28% Linking Words
while
gradually fell down 23%.the expense of coverage still remained the lowest during the span of 20 years.
There was apparently reverse development between Linking Words
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for books and hardware equipment Use synonyms
such
as furniture.They started with the same percentage ,Linking Words
then
the former was four times as much as the latter ,Linking Words
however
the putout of furniture and other facilities overweight that of books and other Linking Words
resources
by two times in the endUse synonyms
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