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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
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provide
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 information
how
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on how
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 much teenagers
eat of
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ate
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 fast food between 1975 and 2000 in Australia
Overall
,
humbergers
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hamburgers
 and pizza
was
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apply
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always rose until the end of
period
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the period
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while
 fish and chip
was decrease
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was decreased
was decreasing
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.
To begin
, hamburgers increased significantly the number of eaten around 68
times
 from 1975 to 1985. Followed next was
peak
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a peak
the peak
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 at 100
times
consumtion
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consumption
 per year. Hamburgers
was never drop
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was never dropped
was never dropping
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 even just a few.
Beside
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 that, in 1975 pizza
was skyrocket
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skyrocketed
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 to 1995 which has more than 88
times
 the number of meals.
Moreover
, a year later it
was remain
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remained
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 steady at above 80.
On the other hand
,
in
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at
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 the start of data
at
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in
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 1975 fish and
chip
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chips
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have
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had
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 the highest
times
 consumption which was 100. But, it always
fall
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fell
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 until ended of
year
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the year
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 and reached
the
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its
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 lowest point at 40. Except between1980 and 1985, it has slight rise around 15
times
.
Furthermore
, in the
last
 15 years, ish and chip
was
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has
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 dramatically
decline
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declined
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Spike
  • Dip
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Plateau
  • Consumption patterns
  • Fast food
  • Processed snacks
  • Health consciousness
  • Marketing influence
  • Demographic factors
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Nutritional education
  • Epidemiological impact
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