The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the popularity of five famous
Instagram
accounts between 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, all five
Instagram
influencers' popularity remarkably increased,
however
, Cristiano Ronaldo's account experienced the highest increase by far. In 2018, Selena Gomez's
Instagram
followers
accounted for 125
million
individuals, representing the most famous influencer on
Instagram
compared to others. Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande had just over 100
million
followers
each on the social media platform.
While
Kylie Jenner
had
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almost 100
million
followers
, The Rock's
Instagram
account
followed
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is followed
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by 90
million
people on
Instagram
. The
followers
of Cristiano Ronaldo's
Instagrama
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Instagram
account roughly tripled by 2021, becoming the most
influencial
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influential
person on
Instagram
by far. The remaining celebrities's
followers
also
saw significant increases, and their numbers of
followers
varied between just over 250
million
people and just under 250
million
people in 2021.
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