the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The provided diagram highlights by which
aluminium
drink cans are reprocessed and the process stages.
Overall
, the picture depicts a cyclical installation consisting of 8 stages, starting with gathering garbage cans in a collection centre and ending with receiving new bottles into the beverage dispensers. Aluminium
is used for the production of new beverage cans and other aluminium
packaging products come from recycled aluminium
.
The process commences when aluminium
beverage containers are collected at the gathering point, and then
they are transferred to the recycling station. At this
point, the aluminium
recycling plant is started. Initially
, old containers melt down into the liquid, which turns into the new aluminium
. Once aluminium
is ready to get rolled, it continues with obtaining fresh tins.
The process ends when recycled bins are filled with refreshments , during the following step they are placed again into the drinks machine and stores, and the recycling begins anew.Submitted by omarovaa.access on
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