The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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form was demonstrated the

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of tourists visiting a Caribbean

island

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between 2010 to 2017. In

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form we can see the total

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of tourists was

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increase

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2014 to 2016 the

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steady.

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it has strikingly

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in 2016. The

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of

visitors

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staying on

cruise

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ships

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visitors

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staying on

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island

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the island

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have some

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. The

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of

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staying on

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ships

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keep

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undulate

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but the

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of

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staying on

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island

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the island

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was gradually grow

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. Past 2011 the

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of

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staying on

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ships

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was evident

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and the

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of

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visitors

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staying on

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island

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the island

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was slightly

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2015 to 2016 the

visitors

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number

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of staying on

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ships

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was keeping

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kept rising

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rise and

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the

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of

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staying on

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island

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the island

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, but The latter

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and

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