Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea

Dear Sam, I hope
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letter finds you in a radiant of health and good spirits. I am writing
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because i
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i
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just came to know
about
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that you are coming to India from Canada and
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I
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am so excited to meet you . It has been four years since we never
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each other . Your birthday is always special for me because
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got
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and trustworthy friend
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that day who made my life meaningful and delightful . Fortunately, your birthday will
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come
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in the same month when you will
be arrived
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. I have booked 'Saffron restaurant' for that occasion they
provides
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amazing and spectacular service in the town .
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, their food is super delicious
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the prices
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are very reasonable. I will be invited our college friends and they will love to see you . Your birthday treat is on me ,
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all the arrangements will be done by their professional staff which include cake , wine and food. Let me know if you like my idea or if you have any suggestions
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will consider that . I am looking forward
hearing
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from you.
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Yours
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truly, Harvinder
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coherence cohesion
Be sure to organize your ideas more clearly by dedicating each paragraph to a separate point. This will enhance the logical flow and coherence of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices and transition words to link your ideas and paragraphs together more effectively.
task achievement
While you have included all parts of the prompt in your letter, ensure that each point is fully developed with specific details.
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Maintain a consistent writing tone appropriate for an informal letter to a friend throughout your message.
coherence cohesion
For greeting and closing, use more typical expressions such as 'Dear [Name]' and 'Best wishes' or 'Take care' followed by a comma, then start the letter on the next line.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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