Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that
,
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culture
through their choices of clothing. I partially agree with this
viewpoint, because someone's clothing might be a reflection of his culture
, customs as well as
character
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a character
this
point is not appropriate always. Rather their behaviours and way
of life also
indicate their culture
.
People generally dress themselves according to
their cultural norms and ideologies. More specifically, a person's dressing sense is a reflection of his own identity. Their clothes may reveal where they belong or how they would act. For example
, South Asian women usually wear shari which is the predictor of their own culture
and characteristics. In their culture
women are considered as
goddesses and they are treated with respect. Wearing shari establishes them as an epitome of worshipness and beauty. Change preposition
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Therefore
, through their choice of clothing, numerous cultural norms and characters of them can be identified.
However
, it is unacceptable to establish a proper understanding of someone's culture
only through their clothing choice. Because,
not everyone is following their traditional ways of clothing nowadays. Remove the comma
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Moreover
, it is imperative that,
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culture
and customs not only reflect through clothes but also
through their way
of life and behaviour. Hence
, if we want to learn about one's culture
, it is wise to follow how he acts or what his way
of life is and that is
the most effective and amazing way
of learning about one's culture
. For instance
, in multicultural Australia, understanding people's lifestyles and behaviour helps us to know about several cultures and characters.
To conclude
, culture
and character can be identified through clothing as well as
people's way
of living. Both are equally considerable and none of them should be underestimated.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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