The supplied bar chart represents data about females in different age that gave a birth to the first child in Australia in the year 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The given graph illustrates information
due to
women's Linking Words
first
pregnancy to the Use synonyms
first
Use synonyms
time
in Use synonyms
a different
Correct the article-noun agreement
different ages
a different age
ages
in Australia in the 3 various Use synonyms
time
periods 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the birth rate in younger Linking Words
ages
witnessed a considerable decline throughout the given Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
in contrast
giving birth in older Linking Words
ages
experienced significantly. Use synonyms
However
, in one particular given age period, Linking Words
this
percentage has shown evacuation in a given Linking Words
time
duration.
From the given chart, it can be seen that pregnancy for the Use synonyms
first
child under the age of 19 in 1966 was about 30% in Australia Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
this
number in 1986 fell to almost 20%, Linking Words
However
by the year 2006 it reached just over 10%. Linking Words
In addition
, having a child for the Linking Words
first
Use synonyms
time
in Australia between the Use synonyms
ages
19 to 24 nearly 60% but Use synonyms
this
percentage dropped to about 35% and Linking Words
this
falling keep continuing with the recorded birth rate was under 30% by 2006.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
first
kid inUse synonyms
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