Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause various health problems.

Converting to a vegetarian can be considered as a good

health

habit. It

reduce

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the unhealthy fat intake, which a majority of

a

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fatal

health

issues

are cause

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by consuming

meat

. In my opinion, I disagree because

vegetable

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cannot provide

the

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enough amount of

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mineral

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and most of the

protein

are

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from

meat

by

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eating the right proportion of

the

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meat

will not make a person

becomes

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unhealthy. People becoming vegetarian could be

due to

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religious or

their

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personal

preference

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,

besides

, some of them still consume eggs and dietary products

while

some are strictly vegetarian. It is

also

called a clean healthy diet

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which is popular in

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social media. It is a good habit to apply but partially not true because it doesn’t mean that serious

health

problem

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can be prevented. Most of the

protein

can be obtained from red

meat

, but it can be replaced by beans.

However

, some of the electrolytes that a person’s

body

should

be received

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can only

obtain

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from animal products,

for example

, fish oil, and collagen. A recent study found that 40% of

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vegetables consumer

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vegetable consumers

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suffer from

the

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chronic constipation

as

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it

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caused by

the

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excessive amount of

fibres

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intake.

Protein

is one of the essential

element

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for the

body

which

mostly

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from

the

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red

meat

. Eating

meat

can help in building the muscle of the

body

especially for

body

builder

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. The

meat

intake allowance for the person

also

varies,

which

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uncontrolled

meat

consumption can

let

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lead

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to some

health

issue

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issues

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,

for example

, high cholesterol.

Thus

, proper consultation with the dietitian and

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an advice

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on the right portion could be one of the

solution

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,

moreover

, not everyone should see the dietitian as there is a mobile application that can track the daily amount in

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technology

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advanced days. It is very important

of

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have a

balance

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diet

everyday

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as not only

meat

and vegetable but

also

fruits take part in daily life. In conclusion, becoming a vegetarian will not be able to avoid from getting

a live threatening

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health

problems as some healthy fat and

protein

from the

meat

are needed.

Thus

, practicing a healthy balanced diet is

a

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best way to maintain the