In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more polluted? What effects does this have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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worldwide

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pollution

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levels

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on the rise in recent years.

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is mainly caused by the development of industrial sectors and the rising

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of vehicles.

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phenomenon leads to negative environmental effects and various

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threatening living beings. The advancement of technology, especially

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transportation and factories,

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accountable for causing

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. In fact, many firms produce most of

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the pollutant

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pollutant

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pollutants

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in the city.

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factory in Serang is believed to be the greatest source of the famous grey smoke in Jakarta's sky.

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smoke is blown by the wind and travels to Jakarta, causing dark fog, which is deteriorated by the presence of numerous vehicles in the city. Other than causing air

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, many factories

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throw the used liquid

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water

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drainages and even rivers like what we have seen in the rivers in Jakarta. As everything has a price,

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is evident to cause illness for humans, animals, and

plants

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air

pollution

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is a threat

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breathing problems

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cough,

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asthma

, and lung cancer. It can be seen how China requires its

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to wear

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outside to prevent them from inhaling harmful air.

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water

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pollution

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can possibly harm

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creatures and

plants

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. The polluted

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in the city rivers most likely contains chemical stuff, and if it is absorbed by the soil, on which the

plants

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grow, gives a greater likelihood for the

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to dry out.

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pollution

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has been a long discourse

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longing to be resolved. I opine that the government should set some rules to combat

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problem. Some of

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are to limit the use

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of transportation

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and

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policies that manage

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water

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disposal.