the graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014
The given line chart compares the fluctuation in the cost of copper, nickel and zinc every month over a certain year.
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the chart that the changes in the price experienced a period of erratic behaviours for all factors during 2014. Linking Words
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faced a downward trend from Correct your spelling
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January
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moreover
, recovered it's upwards.
Looking at the details, Nickel's cost hit the highest point in Linking Words
January
at 6 which was a large amount, during the whole term. It was followed by a significant fall till June in the bottom out at Use synonyms
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after a constant course, level out at one to the end. In the same term, in Linking Words
January
the amount of Zinc fluctuations rose sharply; Use synonyms
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was followed by a dramatic decline in Linking Words
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at mines one and regained its upward trend to the end of the course at two. Use synonyms
Finally
, unlike others Copper saw a remarkable increase at the start, Linking Words
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the same as Nickel and Zinc decreased to June well under zero; It stayed unchanged from July to September at one, and Linking Words
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moved down and up to the end of term at just under two.Linking Words
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