The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information about the fan following of well-known people on Verb problem
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Instagram
between 2018 and 2021.
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million
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followers
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2021,
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followers
.
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Instagram
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