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The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#bar #popularity #instagram #accounts #information #features #comparisons
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 information about the fan following of well-known people on
Instagram
 between 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, Win all the figures taken into consideration, it can be vividly seen that the maximum fan following obtained by Cristiano Ronaldo
while
 remaining for people has
least
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the least
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 popularity on
Instagram
 in the Govt period. analysing the bar graph, it can be seen clearly that the fan following of Cristiano Ronaldo on
Instagram
 was around
hundred
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a hundred
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million
 in 2018
whereas
this
 trend experienced
sharp
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a sharp
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 price and increased by 210
million
followers
 and
stable
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was stable
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 at almost 3 20
million
followers
.the popularity of the rock and Ariana Grande was around 95
million
 and 1 110
million
 in 2018 respectively.In the case of
2021
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2021,
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 both 10
was
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were
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 identical it was around 250
million
followers
.
Further
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 the bar graph collates that the
followers
 of Selena Gomez
was
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were
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 around 20
million
 more than Kylie Jenner in 2018 on
Instagram
. The growth of
followers
 in both
Instagram
Instagram
account
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accounts
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 was almost similar in 2021
that
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which
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 was
also
 around 250000,000
followers
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words instagram, million, followers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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