The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts present the changes in ownership of electronic devices and the amount of
time
spent doing household activities in households in one nation from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the possession of washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners increased throughout the period of time
. Conversely
, the number of hours
of housework per week
per household was constantly decreasing over the same period of time
.
Refrigerators experienced a massive increase in ownership, starting from slightly above 0% to 90% in only 40 years, and peaking at 100% in 1980. In the same manner, vacuum cleaners had a constant growth, starting at 30% and peaking alongside refrigerators in 2000. Although
washing machine was first ranked in ownership in 1920, it was only gaining around 30% in the entire period, peaking at approximately 72% in 2019.
The amount of time
a household needed to spend per week
was decreasing steadily at a rate of 15 hours
per week
per 20 years, from 1920 to 1960. After that, it only slightly decreased and reduced its number from 20 hours
per week
to around 10 hours
per week
in 2019.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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