The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant

The table and bar charts provide information about the

sources

and spending of

budget

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the budget

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of Britain police between 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the three different

sources

of income,

while

the pie charts show the expenditure of

financial

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the financial

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plan.

Overall

,

it is clear that

a large amount of money was spent on officers and staff salaries, rather than building, transport and technology.

Moreover

, the national government is the only body,

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that giving

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giving

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gives

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a huge amount of

budget

yearly,

while

local taxes and other

sources

accounts

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account

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for

minor

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a minor

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portion. In 2017, the national government paid

the

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a

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large amount of

police

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the police

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budget

,

account

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accounting

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for 175.5

Million

Pounds, which

was

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apply

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increased slightly in the next year to 177.8

million

.

However

, 91.2

million

received from the local taxes in 2017, and 102.3

million

in 2018. Other

sources

(eg grants)

accounts

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account

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for the smallest portion of

financial

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the financial

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budget

, they gave 38.

Million

in 2017 and 38.5 in 2018 which is quite stable.

However

, the total financial

budget

of

Britain

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the British

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police

was

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increased from 304.7

million

to 318.6

million

in the preceding year.

On the other hand

, a large portion of

financial

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the financial

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budget

was spent on officers and staff salaries in both years. The proportion of salaries

were

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account

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accounted

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for 75% and 69% of

budget

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the budget

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in 2017 and 2018 respectively.

Furthermore

, in both years, 17% of

money

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the money

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was spent on building and transport,

while

the expenditure on technology increased from 8% to 14% in 2018 respectively.