The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed

The table and bar charts provide information about the

sources

and spending of the

budget

of Britain police between 2017 and 2018. The table illustrates the three different

sources

of income,

while

the pie charts show the expenditure of

financial

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plan.

Overall

,

it is clear that

a large amount of money was spent on the officer and staff salaries rather than building, transport and technology.

Moreover

, the national government is the only source, giving a huge amount of

budget

yearly,

while

the local taxes and other

sources

accounts

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for

minor

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a minor

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portion. In 2017, the police had a

budget

of 304.4

million

, which rose significantly to 318.6

million

in 2018. The majority of

this

money sourced from the national government accounted for 175.5

million

pounds in 2017, which

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increased slightly in the next year to 177.8

million

.

However

, 91.2

million

received from the local taxes in 2017, and 102.3

million

in 2018. Other

sources

(eg grants)

accounts

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account

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for the smallest portion of the financial

budget

, they gave 38.

Million

in 2017 and 38.5 in 2018 which is quite stable.

On the other hand

, a large portion of the financial

budget

was spent on the

officers

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officer's

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and

staff

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staff's

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salaries in both years. Salaries

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received 75% and 69% of

budget

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the budget

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in 2017 and 2018 respectively.

Furthermore

, in both years, 17% of the money was spent on building and transport,

while

the expenditure on

a

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technology increased from 8% to 14% in 2018 respectively.