Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products ( such as cell phone ) or services ( e.g: medical treatment ). Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, a tendency to pay attention to
amount
Correct article usage
the amount
while
purchasing some services can be claimed as the most important thing. It is agreed, that the cost of products does not guarantee high quality
, therefore
, it is not the main factor which deserves public's
trust. Correct article usage
the public's
This
essay,firstly
,will discuss why humanity has so strong confidence that expensive purchases are trustworthy, followed by an analysis of factors which can be observed as a sign of good quality
.
Nowadays, prices influence people's confidence in what they buy,because a trend that cheap stuff is adverse was formed as a consequence
of existence
Correct article usage
the existence
expensive
brands. Change preposition
of expensive
Moreover
, famous people always wear or advertise only Change preposition
to popular
popular
manufacturers. Change preposition
to popular
For example
, Apple became commonly used in society only after celebrities started to exploit it. Undoubtedly, there are some factories which deserve to put their fee high , like Apple, because their products are meaningful and work properly. However
, a lot of stuff,especially clothes, have unjustifiably exorbitant prices. For instance
, Balenciaga has ridiculous things which it sells for thousands of dollars.
Conversely
, a lot of brands which are at the beginning of their development are accessible to people with different economic statuses. Nevertheless
, rich ones underestimate the quality
of firms which is appeared recently, or whose prices are low. In contrast
, there are a lot of small businesses whose products have to be considered as unique. As an example, Correct article usage
the ukrainian
ukrainian
brand ST can be illustrated, since their clothes are really beautiful, Change the capitalization
Ukrainian
while
the cost is middle
.
Correct article usage
the middle
To conclude
,this
essay agrees that not the price should determine the benefit and value of the product, but the quality
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