You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:  explain why you need this time off  give details of when you want this time off  say who can do your work when you are away

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Dear Sir, The objective of writing

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letter is to let you know that I need some days off from work as my sister is getting married and I need to attend

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function. I have been working with

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company

from

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for

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more than 5 years and you always approved my leaves. But

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time

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, I want to

request

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ask

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you if I can get 2 weeks off from 5th March to 20th March

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her wedding. During my

time

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off, Ashok the sales department head is going

take

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to take

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over

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for me

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and I will

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working

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apply

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working online as much as possible.

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, I am available to do

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overtime

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time

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before or after the

request

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requested

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time

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off and I promise my days off will not

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affect

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the company at all. I hope you will consider my concern and

plese

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please

let me know if you require any

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information. Yours Faithfully, Sam

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Task Achievement

Pay attention to formal structure: The greeting should include a full name if known, and avoid abbreviations (e.g., use 'I have' instead of 'I've').

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter could be more clearly organized with distinct paragraphs for each point: explanation, details, and cover during absence.

Task Achievement

For a higher score, expand upon the details of why the time off is necessary and how the work will be managed in your absence; offer to prepare work in advance, if possible.

Coherence & Cohesion

Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,') would improve the flow between sentences and ideas.

Task Achievement

Ensure consistent formal tone throughout the letter, including the closing. Use 'Yours sincerely' if the addressee's name is known, or 'Yours faithfully' if not.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

requesting time off
minimal disruption
capable colleague
cover responsibilities
workload management
urgent tasks
accessible
considering your request
contribute more effectively
appreciate
temporary absence
proactive planning
smooth transition
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