Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing
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, consumers are lured into getting more of the products even though they do not need these things. To exemplify, some individuals often seem to have more than one smartphone after seeing a television commercial for one of their favourite gadget companies release a new product.
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, the waste is just thrown away and can impact flooding.
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