The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
It is argued that the picture demonstrates the floor plan of the social reading room and the differences between how it was 20 years ago and what is now.
As a distinguishing quality, it can be clearly seen from the diagram that there were two round tables with 8 chairs in the centre.
Also
,there were two open spaces, which were named adult fiction books
and adult non-fiction books
. In the library were 3 rooms for computer games, children's books
, reading magazines and newspapers and the area of an enquiry desk.
As shown in the scheme, the central library today has significant changes such
as an empty corridor in the centre. The Field of the adult fiction books
was replaced from the left to the right side of the floor and an information desk and self-service machine were added. next to it.
A particular feature to highlight is that the library became more convenient for relaxing due to
the sofas, storytelling events area and cafe instead
of the desk for tickets.Submitted by balnur_amantay on
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