The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The first graph demonstrates a clear increase in the
computer
ownership
percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010. The second graph illustrates a comparison between education
level
and computer
ownership
rates for the years 2002 and 2010.
Year by year, the computer
ownership
percentage of the population has steadily increased, as illustrated in the first figure, whereas
it started at approximately 55% in 2002, 60% in 2004, 64% in 2006, 68% in 2008, and ended at around 70% in 2010.
Furthermore
, there is a strong relationship between the ownership
of a computer
and the education
level
; a higher education
level
is tied to a higher percentage. As shown in the second figure, most of the population owns a computer
at a higher level
of education
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, education, level with synonyms.
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