The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The
given
pie chart shows how many populations in Verb problem
apply
Yemen
and Italy divided
into three Add a missing verb
are divided
age
groups, which contains
0-14 Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
years
, 15-59 years
and 60+ years
. Overall
, it can be seen that the
Correct article usage
apply
Yemen
's projection results in age
proportions trend is
Change the verb form
are
contradict
to Italy, Replace the word
contradictory
Although
these two countries have a big portion for the age
group of 15-59 years
in both 2000 and 2050.
In 50 years
, Yemen
shows a significant increased
for the Replace the word
increase
age
range of 15-59 years
about 11% to 57.3%, while
Italy witnessed a decrese
trend to 46.2%. Correct your spelling
decrease
Then
, in Italy
Add a comma
Italy,
a younger generations
experienced a rapid surge to 42.3% from 24.1%. Correct the article-noun agreement
a younger generation
younger generations
In contrast
, Yemen
showed relatively little change around 2.1
% rise to 5.7%. Correct article usage
a 2.1
On the other hand
, the elder group in Yemen
had a major fall from 50.1% populations
in 2000 to 37.0% in 2050, meanwhile Fix the agreement mistake
population
in
Italy only experienced a small decrease from 14.3% in 2000 to 11.5% in 2050.Change preposition
apply
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