The charts below show the number of japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of Japanese tourist market. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown beow.
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The charts outline how many
of
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Japanese
tourists on
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were on
trip
abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Add an article
a trip
Australia
's share of the Japanese
tourist market.
In generall
, what stands out from the charts is that Correct your spelling
general
Japanese
going Correct article usage
the Japanese
to
abroad marginally improved over Change preposition
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a
10 years. Correct the article-noun agreement
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By contrast
, Australia
's divided market with Japanese
visitor
significantly increased Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
from
the period between 1985 and 1995.
Looking at the details, Change preposition
in
Japanese
traveler
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travelers
been
to Verb problem
went
Australia
above 4 in 1985 then
considerably climbed for a half_decade. After that, Japanese
tourists slightly fell and the number of traveller
swiftly surged above 14 between 1991 to 1995.
With regards to, Change to a plural noun
travellers
percentage
coming to Correct article usage
the percentage
Australia
, Australia
's divided
with Replace the word
division
Japanese
tourists dramatically grew the perid
between 1985 and 1988. Correct your spelling
period
In addition
, gradually dropped above 4 in 1989. On the other hand
, Australia
's distributed
considerably Replace the word
distribution
shoot
up on top of 6 from 1989 to 1993. Wrong verb form
shot
Finally
, slightly slipped to under 6 from a year.
Rephrase
ago.
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