The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
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The given line chart illustrates how much money
british
Change the capitalization
British
househould
Correct your spelling
households
spent
on their Wrong verb form
spend
children
's sport
activities Change the noun form
sports
in
a monthly basis from 2008 to 2014. The second line chart compares Change preposition
on
children
's attendency
in 3 different sports in Correct your spelling
attendance
this
6-year period.
overall
, there is an obvious increasing trend line in sport
activities Change the noun form
sports
expeditures
in Correct your spelling
expenditures
given
period. Add an article
a given
the given
furthermore
, number
Correct article usage
the number
Swimmers
and Athletics significantly increased and Change preposition
of Swimmers
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
children
who play Football increased just a little.
lets's
get more Correct subject-verb agreement
Let's
in
Change preposition
apply
details
, the amount of money cost by each family Fix the agreement mistake
detail
experience
a growth of about 10 pounds Correct subject-verb agreement
experiences
in
each month which means they Change preposition
apply
paid
almost 30 Wrong verb form
pay
pound
every month for their athletic Change to a plural noun
pounds
children
.
in the second graph it can be seen number
of Change the article
a number
the number
children
who swim rose by about 70% and there was
about 3 million Correct subject-verb agreement
were
swimmersin
Correct your spelling
swimmers in
swimmers
year
2014. if we pay attention to the period between 2010 and 2012 we can realise Correct article usage
the year
number
of Athletics rose by 5 times, from about 1 Add an article
the number
a number
millions
Change to singular
million
athletics
to about 5 Replace the word
athletes
millions
and Change to singular
million
outnumberd
the Correct your spelling
outnumbered
outnumber
amount
of swimmers.Change the quantifier
number
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