the graph show cocoa development process. Describe it

the graph show cocoa development process. Describe it
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graph show cocoa development process. Describe it
The image above shows the process of how liquid chocolate
are
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produced. The process is divided into 10 progressive steps, starting from the cacao tree until the liquid chocolate is made.
First
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The first
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is to find the cacao tree and pick the ripe
cocoa
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pods
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.
Next,
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crack open the
pods
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and collect the white
cocoa
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beans.
Third
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The third
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is to ferment the
cocoa
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beans. After that, spread the ferment in the sun to dry. After it dried, put it in large sacks so they can be carried by train or lorry to the factory. In the factory, it will be roasted and crushed.
Finally
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, the crushed beans will be pressed and
it
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they
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will turn into liquid chocolate. A little information about the cacao trees that are used to make these chocolates
usually
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grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. The unripe
cocoa
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pods
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pods'
pod's
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color
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colour
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is yellow,
while
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the ripe
cocoa
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pods
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that are good to use
color
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colour
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is red.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cocoa, pods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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