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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

#people #travel #language #hometown
Amount number of humans select to trip overseas to tuition
to
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an exotic tongues
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an exotic tongue
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 as an alternative
of acquire
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 knowledge of their
hometown
.There are several advantages
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of
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this
 situation ,
while
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 we must explore
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 From one perspective ,individuals' exploring new cultures and foreign
languages
 is well
development
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.
This
 condition
effects
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affects
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to
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people
's perspective and educated personages may increase .
Thus
, young generations and adults are learning various external
languages
 .If
people
 do not know new knowledge and cultures they do not grow up.
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 ,a person who knows only
same
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 practices may not be
model
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 for younger individuals.
On the other hand
 , learning only other tongues and
do
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not exploring
hometown
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their hometown
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 tongue may
be
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ignore their nation .I think
people
 should study foreign
languages
 and local culture ,because, they are equally important .
Hometown
 language is
symbol
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a symbol
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 of local culture and nation ,
as well as
,knowing it is
first
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 level .
Also
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Also,
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 nonnative argots are important too.
For example
 ,one
personage
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person
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 who knows
hometown
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their hometown
his hometown
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 tongues and
another
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another language
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languages
 is
perfect
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the perfect
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 model for everyone .
Furthermore
 , knowing other cultures
enlargers
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enlarges
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people
's perspective . If we do not
know
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have
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 a lot of
informs
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information
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 and
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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 we will not achieve success .A human who
achiever
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achieves
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 success is
ideal
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the ideal
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 model . In
conclution
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conclusion
,
hometown
 knowledge and distant
languages
 are equally important . We can not choose one of
they
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them
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.
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve the coherence and cohesion of your essay, focus on creating a clear and logical structure. Organize your ideas into well-defined paragraphs, each with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words and phrases to connect your ideas and paragraphs smoothly. Avoid abrupt transitions and ensure each sentence flows naturally into the next.
Task Achievement
For task achievement, ensure that you address all parts of the prompt by providing a balanced discussion of both advantages and disadvantages. Expand your ideas to fully respond to the question, and try to include relevant, specific examples that support your points. Also, be detailed and explanatory in your analysis of each point to fully flesh out your answer.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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