The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons
The two maps illustrate some explicit and pale alterations of Frenton between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, Frenton modernized to a residential area with a myriad of top-notch facilities.In terms of radical Linking Words
changed
, located in the Eastern central area of the map, Replace the word
changes
café
and park made a replacement for Correct article usage
a café
hotel
and golf.Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
Moreover
, the west blocks of flats were constructed at the removal of the old houses, to the Linking Words
north-west
of which one additional block of flats were built. As for playing fields with trees, which Correct your spelling
northwest
was
located in the north of the town, they were demolished for the second blocks of flats to be erected.There were two destinations which were situated in the Western heart Correct subject-verb agreement
were
of
namely a hospital and a bank witnessed a slight expansion compared to their original sizes, Change preposition
apply
furthermore
, the latter redesignated into a restaurant for people to dine out.With respect to mild alterations, Linking Words
locating
in the south-west direction, the area of trees was upgraded into a technopark. Wrong verb form
located
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
theater
Change the spelling
theatre
along with
shops lying in the Linking Words
south-east
corner Correct your spelling
southeast
were
substituted by a new cinema and a supermarket. Change the verb form
was
Finally
, the remaining features stayed unswerving in comparison to the previous map.Linking Words
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