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With internet improvement people can & opinions on certain goods or service that they purchased. Is this good or bad thing?.

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Technology has been increasing dramatically as compared to the past
due to
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 the invention of the technology.
People
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 share and criticise some
products
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 and services on the
internet
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. I think
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 trend has good and bad
things
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;
this
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 essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. On the one hand, the individuals can express their opinions
the
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on the
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products
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 and services
what
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that
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 they purchased. It assists
to
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apply
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the
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other
people
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 before buying
any
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anything
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things
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 they will check the
product
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's
review
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reviews
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 whether good or bad reviews in order to they have to decide buy or not,
as a result
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, humans will have more awareness about the
products
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.
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, mankind
writes
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write
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the
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their
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opinion
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opinions
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 towards any new buying
products
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 on social media
such
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 as Facebook and Instagram. Needless to say, writing
comments
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 in terms of the
product
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's
quality
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 and long-lasting on the
internet
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 helps to purchase the
quality
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 of
products
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instead
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 of the local
things
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. Hereby,
this
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 trend is a good thing.
In contrast
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, writing an opinion based on the
products
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 on the
internet
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 brings more adverse
effect
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effects
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 towards
people
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 who run businesses.
The competitors
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Competitors
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 have a chance to against a particular
company'
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company's
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products
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 is not a good
quality
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through
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by
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 setting
people
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 to
writing
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a bad
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a bad comment
bad comments
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comments
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 on the
internet
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,
thus
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, a good
product
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 may be affected by fake
comments
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 from
the
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fake customers.
For instance
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, small online business persons can affect
people
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's opinions on the
internet
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 and they may
be
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shut down their business because of the low sales and
people
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 do not believe their
products
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is
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a good.
Besides
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, fake customers are appointed by the local
quality
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 of the
companie's
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company's
companies
 owner to write good
comments
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 towards their low standard of goods.
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, it is a bad thing.
To conclude
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,
although
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 individuals have a chance to buy high-standard goods
through
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by
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 seeing reviews based on
the
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particular
products
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, fake customers take more
advantages
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advantage
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to write
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of writing
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a
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apply
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bad
comment
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comments
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 towards the
product
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.
However
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, I think the trend has equally good and bad
things
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.

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coherence cohesion
Try to structure your essay more logically by clearly separating your introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use transition words and phrases to create better flow between sentences and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Include a clear introduction with a thesis statement that outlines what your essay will discuss and a conclusion that summarizes your main points and reiterates your stance.
coherence cohesion
Develop your main points with more detailed explanations and include relevant examples that are directly related to your arguments. This will help to support your ideas more convincingly.
task achievement
Ensure you respond to the task directly by addressing whether the ability to post opinions online is a good or bad thing. Make sure your stance is clear throughout the essay and specifically address the prompt in both your introduction and conclusion.
task achievement
Expand your ideas to fully cover the topic. Make your argument comprehensive by exploring the impacts of user reviews on both consumers and businesses with more depth and provide specific, real-world examples to illustrate your points.
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