The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.
The presented process diagram provides a
well explained
overview of the stages involved in Add a hyphen
well-explained
production
of Add an article
the production
sugar
from sugarcane.
This
procedure comprises of
seven stages and those are growing,harvesting, crushing,purifying juice,evaporating, centrifuging,drying and cooling.
The growth period Change preposition
apply
tooks
twelve to eighteen months and harvesting by means of tractor or manual.Once the growth phase is over and the crop reaches its maturity,it is harvested by tools or machinery.The stalk Correct your spelling
took
undergo
crushing via Change the verb form
undergoes
grinder
resulting Correct article usage
a grinder
the
extraction of juice.The extracted juice Change preposition
in the
directed
into Add a missing verb
is directed
a
evaporator through a limestone filter which undergoes heating and results in Change the article
an
thick
,viscous form known as syrup.
Add an article
a thick
the thick
Therefore
,the syrup undergoes separation from sugar
crystals which tend to isolate the carbohydrate crystals from syrup.Later ,the sugar
is dried and cooled resulting sugar
as the final and expected product.Change preposition
in sugar
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