The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.

The diagram describes the

process

of how

sugar

is produced from

sugarcane

with various

process

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. I will explain the

process

in the following paragraphs.

Overall

, it is observed that there are seven steps in manufacturing

sugar

from

sugarcane

. It starts

from

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growing, harvesting, crushing ,

purifying

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and it ends

in

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drying and cooling. To start, the

sugarcane

is grown within

the

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period of 12 to 18 months and

second

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step is harvesting,

sugarcane

is harvested by a machine or with the help of

hand

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. After harvesting sugarcanes are crushed and they produce

a

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juice. The juice is

being

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purified by using a limestone filter ,

then

it is

evaporator

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and juice becomes syrup after heating. The sixth

process

is centrifuge which separates

sugar

crystals from syrup and it is ready for drying and cooling. After drying and cooling,

sugar

is ready for

sales

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.

To conclude

,

sugar

is manufactured from

sugarcane

through various

process

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processes

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. After completing the

process

sugar

is ready for

sales

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and consumers can buy it whenever they needed.