The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three 

countries.
This
chart illustrates how different countries
such
as the United Kingdom, Sweden and the Republic of Korea, get rid of waste products.
Overall
, in the British country, the biggest part of these useless materials, are buried. In Korea, they prefer to recycle even if most of these products are underground as well. For Sweden, it is more balanced, there is a big part underground as in the United Kingdom.
However
, another part is recycled and the other is incinerated. For the Korean population, 69% of waste products are sent to recycling. The 22% is buried underground and
finally
, the 9% remaining is sent to incineration. British people,
also
like to bury the waste, with 82% of these buried underground. The 8% is thrown into the sea. Another 8% is treated with chemical treatment and 2% is burned. For Sweden, there are not as many options as for the United Kingdom.
For example
, the buried stuff represents 55%. 25% are recycled and 20% are subjected to fire.
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