The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The graph compares the different ways, multiple countries handle and get rid of their hazardous waste.
Overall
, Sweden and the United Kingdom are more used to getting rid of their unsafe rubbish underground or by incineration. Linking Words
While
the Republic of Korea uses recycling as their first way to deal with trash. the Republic of Korea is a more responsible nation regarding the environment.
Sweden digs and places their critical trash underground for the majority of 55%. Linking Words
However
, the United Kingdom place their waste underground with a crushing majority of 82%. Linking Words
Although
dealing with rubbish by putting it underground is not the only way of discarding debris, it can have big repercussions on the environmental elements surrounding the wasteland.
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Whereas
the latter countries buried treacherous scrap underground, the Asian nation recycles 69% of it. Even though it is not the only way of getting rid of scrap, Korea only uses incineration for 9% of its scrap and digs it underground 22% of the time. In comparison to the 2 former countries, the Asian country is the country with the most sustainable habits.Linking Words
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