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The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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As we can see in these three pie charts , dangerous waste products are dealt with in multiple different ways, depending on the country. These percentages depict in what way the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom prefer to eliminate their toxic garbage.
Overall
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, these three countries have a tendency to bury their garbage underground, more specifically both European countries.
By contrast
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, the Republic of Korea has shown a higher level of innovation
due to
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 their research, using recycling as its principal method of dealing with trash. On one hand, the United Kingdom buries 82% of their toxic waste products which is slightly higher than Sweden which buries 55%,even though it is approximately 30% less.
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, The Asian country shows a different way of working with debris, burying around 4 times less than the UK and 2 times less than Sweden.
On the other hand
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, incineration only represents 2% in the UK,
whereas
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 , in the Asian nation, it almost occupies a tenth of their activities and a fifth in the Scandinavian country. Incineration can be a solution the UK has not considered yet and might be the correct answer

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