The pie chart below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
In
this
document we can see three charts that represent the different ways of destroying dangerous waste
products in three countries, one represents the Republic
of Korea
, one Sweden
population, and the other one represents the United Kingdom
.
Firstly
, we can see that in the three countries, the dangerous debris is underground. In Sweden
, in the United Kingdom
and in the Republic
of Korea
, they incinerate their waste
products. Additionally
, the Republic
of Korea
and Sweden
recycle their rubbish, but the United Kingdom
does not.
The United Kingdom
is the country that buries the most of debris, 82%. But it is the United Kingdom
that incinerates the least waste
product with 2%. Finally
, the Republic
of Korea
is the country that recycles most of its rubbish (69%).
After the United Kingdom
, it is Sweden
(55%) and the Republic
of Korea
(22%) that buried the most debris. In comparison with the United Kingdom
, the Republic
of Korea
incinerated (9%) and Sweden
burnt (20%). To finish, Sweden
recycles 25 % of their rubbish (the United Kingdom
do not recycle their waste
products 0%.)Submitted by santos_dij on
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