The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph shows the
number
of residents in Great Britain moving every day by three various means of transport from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, over the given period
, commuting by car increases gradually and reaches 9 million commuters annually. Furthermore
, the numbers of passengers moving by bus and by train in 2015 are the same.
To begin
with, the figures for car commuters in 1970 is 5 million people. However
, this
amount rises rapidly for the next 30 years. The number
of travellers from 2000 remains steady till 2010. Moreover
,,
an upward trend in car use starts in 2010 and lasts till the end of the Change the punctuation
apply
period
.
In fact, the level of passengers who travel by bus is twice as high as the number
of those who travel by train at the beginning of the period
. Nevertheless
, the latter increases significantly over the period
. Moreover
, this
amount exceeds the number
of bus travellers in 2015.Submitted by julykryuchkova on
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