The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
The line graph shows the
number
of residents in Great Britain moving every day by three various means of transport from 1970 to 2030.
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Overall
, over the given Linking Words
period
, commuting by car increases gradually and reaches 9 million commuters annually. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the numbers of passengers moving by bus and by train in 2015 are the same.
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To begin
with, the figures for car commuters in 1970 is 5 million people. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
amount rises rapidly for the next 30 years. The Linking Words
number
of travellers from 2000 remains steady till 2010. Use synonyms
Moreover
,Linking Words
,
an upward trend in car use starts in 2010 and lasts till the end of the Change the punctuation
apply
period
.
In fact, the level of passengers who travel by bus is twice as high as the Use synonyms
number
of those who travel by train at the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the latter increases significantly over the Linking Words
period
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
amount exceeds the Linking Words
number
of bus travellers in 2015.Use synonyms
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