The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The bar chart represents some information about the rates of the number of citizens in the United Kingdom who were recommended amount of fruit and vegetables in their daily routine for three groups of people, who are men, women and kids. The dates are available for
8-year
period every 4 years since 2002 before 2010.
As a distinguishing quality, it can be clearly seen from the diagram that the rates of every group increased from 2002 to 2006 and fell again in 2010. For a primary example, as it was shown, the percentage of men equalled 22% at the beginning of that study, Add an article
an 8-year
whereas
the share in 2010 stayed almost the same (24%) after it went up to 28% in 2006.
As for the maximum, women eat more healthy products, than men and children. For instance
, the percentage of it was 32% in 2006 in the whole period of this
investigation.
The interesting feature to highlight is that,
children lead to the rules of recommendation for eating fruits and vegetables every day less, than other groups of people. Remove the comma
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Thus
, the shares of children consumers are the lowest and equalled not more, than 16%.Submitted by balnur_amantay on
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