There is no denying the fact
of
discovering space is useless is ubiquitous across the globe Change preposition
that
due to
its paramount importance. One school of thought Linking Words
opine
that it is worthless, Correct subject-verb agreement
opines
Linking Words
however
others prefer that funds should be spent in social and economic fields. Add the comma(s)
however,
Although
, Linking Words
this
has a plethora of merits Linking Words
yet
numerous demerits Correct word choice
apply
also
are elaborated Linking Words
in
upcoming paragraphs.
Initiation Change preposition
on in
the
best positive Add a missing verb
is the
benefits
, the most significant advantage is to find an appropriate planet as Earth plant environment to transfer humans there because Earth's planet is crowded and the ratio of pollution Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
increase
gradually. To clarify, when people are living Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
in
Change preposition
on
others
planets, Correct quantifier usage
other
so
Correct word choice
apply
this
will create more comfort and the amount of pollution will decrease. Linking Words
For instance
, authorities in developing nations planned to transfer their population to settle Linking Words
in
Mars. Change preposition
on
Thus
, space exploration can assist Linking Words
public
Correct article usage
the public
living
effortless life.
On the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well. First and foremost, many individuals are homeless, so governments should spend money to build houses and provide other facilities like hospitals and schools. To explain, when authorities are expending funds in these various buildings, there will not be any humans under stress and all of them are in good health. Change preposition
in living
Linking Words
Also
the phenomenon of illiteracy will disappear. Add a comma
Also,
For example
, research has Linking Words
been proved
that 50% of the public Wrong verb form
proven
are
sleeping Correct subject-verb agreement
is
on
stress because they do not have enough money. Change preposition
under
As a result
, the dilemma of homelessness and other crimes will Linking Words
destroy
if governments Wrong verb form
be destroyed
put
their communities in priority.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, I believe that space exploration has benefits Verb problem
make
especially
Add the comma(s)
, especially
in
human life, but at the same Change preposition
for
time
it is better to invest money to get rid of several problems that people are suffering on Earth.Add a comma
time,
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