The line graph provides information about the number of visitors who visit international museums from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph provides information on the
number
of visitors
to international museums
from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
, it can be observed that the number
of Louvre
visitors
slightly increased between 1980 and 2015, while
there was a significant growth in the number
of visitors
to the Vatican Museums
during the same period. Moreover
, the number
of visitors
to the London
Science
Museum
steadily decreased over 35 years, whereas
there was little change in the number
of Shenzhen
Museum
visitors
over the same period.
Examining the visitors
to the Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
Louvre
in more detail, it was approximately 7 million
in 1980, compared to around 5 million
for the Vatican Museums
, approximately 4.1 million
for the London
Science
Museum
, and roughly 2.9 million
for the Shenzhen
Museum
. Another noteworthy point is that the number
of visitors
to the Shenzhen
Museum
gradually fell until 2000, reaching nearly 2.5 million
. In contrast
, the figure for visitors
to the Vatican Museums
changed; the number
of visitors
showed a jump from about 5 million
to around 7.9 million
. Moreover
, there was a sharp drop in the figure for visitors
to the London
Science
Museum
. In conclusion, the number
of visitors
to the Louvre
was higher than the others in 2015, at about 9 million
, marking the highest point in this
graph.
To sum up
, the number
of Louvre
visitors
exceeded the others from the beginning to the end, while
the figure for Shenzhen
Museum
visitors
was lower than the other three international museums
at the beginning. However
, the number
of London
Science
Museum
visitors
became smaller than the other three international museums
as time went by.Submitted by kk884 on
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