The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the

consistant

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consistent

consistency

of

nutritions

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nutrition

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:

carbohydrates

,

protein

, glucose, fat, and other

nutrients

, in both baked potato and Macaroni. The

mesurements

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measurements

were given in percentages. At a glance,

while

carbohydrates

and

protein

dominates

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dominate

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in both

menues

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menus

venues

, fat accounts for the smallest ratio of medium baked potato,

whereas

other

nutrients

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nutrients are

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resonsible

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responsible

for the lowest percentage in Macaroni.

Look

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Looking

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at the baked potato, more closely,

meanwhile

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the

carbohydrates

and

protein

takes

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take

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the majority ratio in nutritional

consistancy

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consistency

, at 35 and 25, respectively, it is interesting to note that glucose and other

nutrients

encounter

the

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a

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similar ratio at 15, followed by the proportion of fat which constitutes only 10. Resembly to the proportion of

nutrients

in Macaroni, both

carbohydrates

and

protein

make up the predominant part

of

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apply

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contained in

this

menu, at 52 and 11, respectively;

however

, they are followed by fat and

gluclose

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glucose

which

accountable

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are accountable

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for 21 and 11, respectively. Surprisingly, other

nutrients

are gathered in

this

menu just 5.