The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the

consistant

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consistent

consistency

of

nutritions

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nutrition

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:

carbohydrates

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,

protein

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, glucose, fat, and other

nutrients

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, in both baked potato and Macaroni. The

mesurements

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measurements

were given in percentages. At a glance,

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carbohydrates

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and

protein

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dominates

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in both

menues

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menus

venues

, fat accounts for the smallest ratio of medium baked potato,

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other

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nutrients

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nutrients are

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resonsible

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responsible

for the lowest percentage in Macaroni.

Look

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at the baked potato, more closely,

meanwhile

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the

carbohydrates

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and

protein

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takes

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the majority ratio in nutritional

consistancy

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consistency

, at 35 and 25, respectively, it is interesting to note that glucose and other

nutrients

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encounter

the

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a

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similar ratio at 15, followed by the proportion of fat which constitutes only 10. Resembly to the proportion of

nutrients

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in Macaroni, both

carbohydrates

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and

protein

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make up the predominant part

of

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apply

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contained in

this

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menu, at 52 and 11, respectively;

however

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, they are followed by fat and

gluclose

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glucose

which

accountable

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are accountable

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for 21 and 11, respectively. Surprisingly, other

nutrients

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are gathered in

this

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menu just 5.