Some people believe that professionals , such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuess both these views and give your opinion.

Whereas
some individuals believe that
experts
,
such
as doctors, engineers and architects, should remain in
their
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countries
which
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they
trained
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, others feel that they should choose wherever they want to start their tendencies.
According to
these
views
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it would
bbe
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be
better if there should be a balance between these opinions. On the one hand, It is vitally important for the governments to utilize
such
these
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professionals in their own countries in various positions. In
this
way
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their investment in
such
areas would
be preserve
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.
For
instance
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such
kinds of masters, play
an
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significant role
on
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the
developing
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of a country. As an example of
this
statement
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I could say
such
a
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talanted
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talented
and experienced
enginners
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engineers
could
built
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modern
skycrapers
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skyscrapers
. another benefit of
this
view is that the
experts
do not feel
of
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homesick or
loneliness
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when they work in their
mother land
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motherland
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.
On the other hand
, some people believe that
experts
could decide about their futures. I mean if there are job
oppourtunities
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opportunities
in
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the
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oversea
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, they should be better that have
chance
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to make
decision
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about their lives by
this
view is that in
1990s
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. Germany accepts plenty of migrants to increase
experts
in its country.
Although
experts
leave their birth place, they support their families,
also
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earn a large amount of money better than their own countries. In conclusion,
This the
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governments should
decided
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to provide
balance
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opprtunities
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opportunities
for each
indivituals
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individuals
individual
.
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